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Like to have some comments on this video

When you have nothing to do to be productive, you will eventually ends up with something like this. I would like to have some comments on this TVC (to-be or not to be)

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  • Good start, but I can't read some of the text.

    Reminds me of Lost in Translation.

  • funyuns_are_awesome said: Good start, but I can't read some of the text.

    After encoding, it missed some original colors. Thank you for your comment. (btw-I'm not a video director or animator)

  • EdgeWebEdgeWeb Member

    The nutcracker sample kills it, you can completely remove that.

    Putting a mostly transparent grey box behind the white text can make it easier to read on light backgrounds.

    Other than that, good job.

  • EdgeWeb said: Putting a mostly transparent grey box behind the white text can make it easier to read on light backgrounds.

    Yeah. Already done it. It was just looking fine until youtube conversion on formats. lol

    Same as facebook jpeg compression.

  • Not bad i must say.

  • PremiumN said: Not bad i must say.

    Thanks

  • What is the purpose of this video?

  • Admiral_Awesome said: What is the purpose of this video?

    Just created as a experiment. :)

  • edited May 2015

    I am assuming it is some sort of promotional video.

    To be honest i think it is total crap and makes no sense.

    "we live in a world

    where verything is faster

    active 24x7

    reaching everyone

    time is running out

    get global

    build your www"

  • 4n0nx4n0nx Member

    music awful

    text makes no sense

    video not suitable to advertise web hosting

  • Admiral_Awesome said: I am assuming it is some sort of promotional video.

    4n0nx said: video not suitable to advertise web hosting

    This is not a promo for web hosting. Also anyone heard of minimalist videos ?

  • Admiral_Awesome said: To be honest i think it is total crap and makes no sense.

    Do not only look at the titles. Try to understand it as you're reading a modern art. It's a expression video. Which will let you to think about it. Not to go viral on it.

  • 4n0nx4n0nx Member

    sdglhm said: This is not a promo for web hosting

    Then the video makes even less sense

  • SpeedyKVMSpeedyKVM Banned, Member

    The overlapping sound sequence from 00:12->00:17 is horrible.

  • jarjar Patron Provider, Top Host, Veteran
    edited May 2015

    It's good but change "www" to "website" and maybe try making the text transparent with inverted colors so that it both blends with and stands on top of the background image, ensuring it's readability without separating it from it's environment. Don't put a shadow or background behind the text or it will take away from the creative feel.

  • Incero said: The overlapping sound sequence from 00:12->00:17 is horrible.

    Already removed it. I did sound for this on my laptop (which has a horrible sound card)

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