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Need your comments about my logo

MichaelBuiMichaelBui Member
edited July 2014 in General

These are some ideas of logo for brand name 'XOOSU' (general purposes). Thanks @NodeKid for your idea.

What do you think the BEST logo now? And how can I make the best even BETTER? :)

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Thanks in advance :)

About my logo
  1. What is the BEST logo?25 votes
    1. Logo #1
        4.00%
    2. Logo #2
      60.00%
    3. Logo #3
        8.00%
    4. Logo #4
        0.00%
    5. Logo #5
        4.00%
    6. Logo #6
        8.00%
    7. Logo #7
        4.00%
    8. Logo #8
        4.00%
    9. Logo #9
        4.00%
    10. Logo #10
        4.00%
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Comments

  • wychwych Member

    Not sure what feedback you want but...
    I read it as XOON after looking at it a while.

  • The S and the U aren't the clearest.

  • I like the concept. Make the S look like an S, you'll have to deviate from using the same shape to make the letters but it's worth it for clarity.

  • Great logo concept, try make it slimmer.

  • Looks nice! only issue is as @wych mentioned it read more as xoon, may be you can tilt the s slightly

  • wychwych Member

    You could rotate the S bit and make the U full height, that may work as @RichardLeik said.

  • FlorisFloris Member

    Get it designed here www.fiverr.com

    Thanked by 1hostnoob
  • Is it XOOUNU or XOON?. Else it looks good!

    Thanked by 1iriO
  • If you didn't tell me it was XOOSU, I would have never guessed in a million years.

  • I'm not a big fan. I would have never guessed it was xoosu.

  • souensouen Member

    Overall style is nice with enough contrast and crisp lines. I agree with the other comments about the SU, not as legible and the different width makes the whole look, for lack of a better word, unbalanced. Might be better if the S is upright and the U in full height.

  • @NodeKid Thats amazing. Thanks a lot for your idea! :)

    Also, I have updated my logo based on previous comments, please do share your comments.
    (I will update a new version based on @NodeKid idea very soon)

  • emgemg Veteran

    I agree with many others - thinner lines, upright "S" and make the stems on the "U" match. It won't be as "clever" but it will be readily identifiable.

  • I have updated a new one based on @NodeKid idea. A big thanks to you, @NodeKid

    What do you think the BEST logo now? And how can I make the best even BETTER? :)

  • FlorisFloris Member
    edited July 2014

    @MichaelBui said:
    I have updated a new one based on NodeKid idea. A big thanks to you, NodeKid

    What do you think the BEST logo now? And how can I make the best even BETTER? :)

    How about you go onto fiverr.com and let someone do it for $5, pro designers there.
    And yeah, from these, NodeKid's one is the best, but it's still XOOSJ, not XOOSU.


    Someone like:

    http://www.fiverr.com/logo_pro_logo/do-a-2d-3d-logo?context=adv.cat_3.subcat_49&context_type=rating&funnel=2014072716130855419777520

    Could make you a AMAZING logo, simply because he has been doing this for 10 years already and knows what the do's and don'ts are.

  • hostnoobhostnoob Member
    edited July 2014

    @nodekid's is good

  • The first four are horrible. Can't understand anything after XOO.

    @NodeKid's one is better, but yeah, I still don't know if I'd read it as XOOSU if I didn't knew. Looks like XOOSJ right off the bat.

    Overall it reminds me of Vaio but not half as good.

  • emgemg Veteran
    edited July 2014

    Disclaimer: I have no artistic talent or perception.

    I would like to see an example that starts with #4 (NodeKid's idea), but includes the following changes:

    • Bind the "X" together so that the top pieces touch each other as in #1 and do the same with the bottom pieces. Otherwise, I don't see the "X" very well.
    • Use semicircles in the "O"s as in #1.
    • Sorry, the "U" looks like a "J". I suggest using the tighter curves that you used in the "S", with the bottom solid (kind-of semicircle, but with the tighter s curves) as I suggested with the "O"s.

    The result I expect is something much more readable, but still has the implied line/gap across the middle.

    P.S. How is it pronounced? Do you want to include a transliteration? See this logo where they show you how to pronounce it: http://www.pixarplace.com/wp-content/uploads/Ratatouille_logo.jpeg

  • I agree.

    @Jack said:
    Sucks.

  • Thanks @Linking and @Jack. I know I'm not a good designer, that's why I need people's contribution :)

    @emg I have made some more changes as your suggestion. How do you feel?

  • Just updated with 1 more logo

  • change the font to wingdings and it will be better.

  • @NodeKid said:
    FWIW combining an O, S & U in that order is a royal pain in the arse.

    Perhaps something like

    image

    Although personally I'm non-plussed about it.

    Best logo for this style :) maybe the op could buy the rights from you :)

  • Can I vote for #11 : Get a new brand name that makes sense :)

  • BradBrad Member

    What did i just look at?

  • @rajprakash Can you ask Google to do that? If they're convinced, I will definitely get a new one. Otherwise, that's my final decision and sorry, there are no such #11 :)

  • DylanDylan Member

    @MichaelBui said:
    rajprakash Can you ask Google to do that? If they're convinced, I will definitely get a new one. Otherwise, that's my final decision and sorry, there are no such #11 :)

    You keep harping on that, but you do know Google's name is a play on an existing word and not meaningless at all, right?

  • @Dylan I don't think a brand name has to be meaningful somehow. By the way, until I find a better one, I won't change it.

  • NekkiNekki Veteran

    That looks dreadful. Abandon ship, man overboard!

  • ScionScion Member

    I'm not a huge fan of any of them but I like @NodeKid 's the best IF you fix the U to look like a U instead of a J. I do think going that direction has some potential.

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